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Hi Vasiata, It's great to see that you can embed a video onto your blog. It would be really helpful for your audience if you explained to your audience what was good about your speech, and what you would improve on if you had to do it again.- Miss Percy
Hey VasiataI like how you had some repetition. Can you speak a little bit louder next time you do another speech? From Your Friend Tulei
Hi Vasiata,
ReplyDeleteIt's great to see that you can embed a video onto your blog. It would be really helpful for your audience if you explained to your audience what was good about your speech, and what you would improve on if you had to do it again.
- Miss Percy
Hey Vasiata
ReplyDeleteI like how you had some repetition. Can you speak a little bit louder next time you do another speech?
From Your Friend Tulei